Very simple (which is always good),
and works well.
Ideas for the Home Page
top and left menu are excellent, and the image of cranes is a good visual clue
to what your company does. Ditch the other image - it doesn't need to be on the
If your site was larger, I would suggest creating additional
pages for About Us and Contact Us. At present having this info on the home page
is good. But it needs to be re-done.
Shift this well-written text from page4.html
to your home page, and let it be the first thing the customer reads:
"Bonadiman Consultants, Inc. is a full turn-key design/build firm specializing
in modular, expandable sewer treatment facilities and stormwater prevention systems.
Our clients are developers, county parks and recreation, special county districts,
hospitals, hotels, and rual communities. We provide all aspects of the wastewater
plant development and waste discharge permitting process with enphasis on tertiary
treatment for water re-use."
Write a very brief paragraph
describing your different services, and have a link from each paragragh to the
appropriate section of your site.
Place contact details at the bottom of
the page. As you only appear to have one office, get rid of the link to the second
web site, which is labeled "California Office" - it's confusing, and
every extra click doubles the chance that you will lose the visitor.
what type of information the visitor can receive by phoning or emailing. Perhaps
one email address for general information, and another for quotes.
At the top of each page, Bonadiman Consultants, Inc.
Design-Build-Operate would look better if the last three words had a smaller font
size and appeared on the next line.
page2.html - Don't use lists of points
on their own. At the very least, start the page by saying like "These are
some of the successfully completed major projects we have managed". Otherwise
I cannot tell what your involvement was. Ideally write a paragraph about each
Wastewater plant engineering and
construction from 3000 gallons per day to several million gallons. Full tertiary
plants for water re-use or secondary treatment.
... is just
statements. You need some pro-active phrases in there like "we can supply",
"we are able to provide".
page3.html - In what way is your company
allied with Ecofluid? Their webiste doesn't seem to mention Bonadiman. You need
to say something like "Bonadiman Consultants, Inc. highly recommend the services
of Ecofluid. We have worked with them on [detail projects] and we can intergrate
their services into our solutions. More details are available at Ecofluid's web
page4.html - Suffers from the same point list problem as page2.html.
The bottom text belongs on your home page, or an "About Us" page.
- Again, it needs more text, more information. The top image would be much better
without the text within it, especially because it is too small to read.
Page Display Problems
is too wide, and requires the visitor to browse sideways
The image http://www.sewer-treatment.com.futuresite.register.com/db4/00384/sewer-treatment.com/_uimages/equipment41.gif
on page5.html is not loading.
works. Pages loaded quickly.
is almost totally devoid of words which inspire me to use your service. It lacks
enthusiasm about your product. If a visit to your web site is intended to gain
you more sales, look into hiring a copywriter to improve the writing.
If you enlarge the site and include a Contact Us page,
give people the option of requesting info via a form. This gets the best response.