Can't fault it - clean and professional.
Would I buy?
I hit a snag. I could
not work out exactly what your services offer.
Presence Online and Spot
page describes the number of pages that will be analyzed. Such details should
be included in these pages, not just on the Comparison page.
The red line
stating "GUARANTEED Registration " and the repetition of prices and
ordering links makes me think there are two options on each page. It would be
much clearer if the point lists were unbroken and there was only only price and
Presence Online says the following:
- Do it yourself registration
for one time fee.
- Registering of proprietary keywords.
of site in up to 1200 quality search engines (including AOL, Yahoo!, Hotbot, MSN,
Google, InfoSeek, Lycos, Ask Jeeves, AltaVista, All The Web, Netscape and more....)
- I'm confused by "do it yourself"
- if I do it myself, what am I paying you for?
- How will I actually do it
myself - how hard will it be?
- And what is "Registering of proprietary
...these things need to explained in more detail.
of site in up to 1200 quality search engines".
If you are able to
submit to this many engines, it shouldn't be difficult to list them all on your
site. I would have more confidence in your product if I saw such a list. Especially
if you could qualify the word "quality".
The Spot Keeper page has a price of $29.95 at the top, whereas below it is
Typos / Bad grammar
On this page:
1st page PLACEMENT in major search engines (AOL, Lycos, MSN, Ask, Netscape, AltaVista,
Google, yahoo and HotBot)"
Yahoo is in lowercase.
report is extremely helpful to recognize web surfing habits of the customer when
they arrive to your web site, what is the search term used to arrive to your site
and what they favorite pages are and more
understanding of the psychological pattern of your customers web surfing
habit, Eden Production..."
You need to change the company name.
On the home page:
Online ($24.95 Us)"
US should be capitalized, and would look better
On this page:
(Search Engine Consultant)"
...should be SEC (Search Engine Consultants),
Strange for SEO experts...
The Spot Keeper
page (and others) doesn't have any description or keywords meta tags in the HTML.
Your site should really practice what it preaches... Likewise with being listed
in search engines - why is your site not in Yahoo's directory?
Snap.com is still mentioned on this page:
(and Excite is no longer a search engine that accepts submissions)
Always a good idea for a site that sells services.
If you want to keep the testimonials on a pop-up page (some folk hate pop-ups,
whether they are ads or not), perhaps consider placing all three on the one page
- they are short enough to fit, and would save me from clicking three times to
read them all.
The image is not showing at the base of your pop-up testimonials: